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Post by Jake27278 on May 3rd 2015, 10:00 pm

Username: jake27278
Application link: http://biohazard.4umotion.com/t1191-jake27278-4
Who denied you: roxxar
Reason: Ok i wasn't even revising this is what i meant by 12. What can you offer to the clan?:
I can offer all my support, and loyalty to all members of BoZ  and help in upcoming events and then in the comments this is what i meant by I was explaining to X D this is what I was trying to say wasn't revising
Why you feel the reason you were denied is unjust: its wrong that this is what i was trying to say and i get denied because roxxar think that i am revising
Other: Roxxar i think you should watch your mistakes VERY CAREFULLY.
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Post by Michaelhero on May 3rd 2015, 10:36 pm

You actually revised it, here you can see it.

This was your application answer

In first, you posted you wanted to join to support, etc. etc., you want to be a loyal member, etc. etc.
Then somehow you changed that to a ''BoZ is an active and strong clan, it is keeping pushing you, etc.'' completely different to the first answer, that's a revise man.
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Post by Roxxar on May 3rd 2015, 10:37 pm

You essentially added more/changed your answer for Q8.

Original Answer:


Edited Answer (after x D commented on your application about how your Q8 and Q12 were similar)


The phrase "what I meant" is essentially revising, as you are stating your opinion/answer in a different fashion, usually for a better feedback from others. I'm not exactly sure how you think you're NOT revising when you obviously state a different answer for an answer you wanted to work more on.

Let's also note that your 2nd, 3rd, and most recent application (4th) have EXTREMELY SIMILAR answers, showing very little effort in trying to join in the first place.

And yes, I have checked myself carefully beforehand. Any more questions or concerns, feel free to post them here.

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Post by Jake27278 on May 4th 2015, 12:19 am

i understand thanks
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